The faces of Yuan and Kratos seem too feminine to me. This might be due to your drawing style and I know bishonen exists, but I think they look too much like girls here. Everything else is just beautiful, although Yuan didn't have pointy ears, did he?
That said, I've seen newer submissions from you, so I know that these issues are not as present in your current style. I just wanted to point out what I find is worth criticising.
Wonderful work on the colouring and proportions and of course the fact, that you thought this scene up.
Hello, I am doing a fansite on tales of symphonia for school and I have to add fan created content to my site, I would of course link back to your deviant art (or prefered link) and give all the credit for the art to you, could I use your drawing on my site? Also I don't make any money with the site.
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Can I just say this is beautiful? You drew Martel's face perfectly. It's so sweet and innocent and kind. And Kratos--oh gosh you really captured him pre-fall. You can definitely see the shadow in him that led to his change to cynical and fatalistic.